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大家帮我看看这个简历有没有什么错误的地方
JiangFeng Yu's Resume
Personal Data
Name: JiangFeng Yu
Gender: Male
Age :36 years old
Address: 14#205,HuBei road,HuaShan county ,MaAnShan
Tel:13855556636
Education：associate degree

Demonstrated ability in the literature and writing，Calligraphy and music，sounder and computer，administration（Human Resource、Labour and CapitalGeneral Service、quality training ），planning、Advertising、marketing  and manage of  Hotel Various departments.

Principia: Honesty and serious ，Excellent worker with staidness and responsibility， Equipped with team spirit and curiosity into objects. Have competitive spirit and sense of creating innovation.full ability about marketing ,，good interpersonal relationship ，now Engage in Hotel Management and training.

EXPERIENCE:
1993.9~2002.6
CHANGCHENG hotel , manager of administration department ,Food & Beverage department、Recreation and Entertainment department.
2002.9~2003.3
HAIXING international hote, General Manager Assistant。
2003.4~2004.3  
ShangHai HAOJIAFU hotel ,vice manager.
2004~present
MaAaShan automobile hotel ,general manager assistant.management consultant  of MaAnShan XINGHAO hotel .
I am a member of Hard-tipped writing instruments calligraphy Association ,a member of  AnHui Calligrapher Association , a member of MaAnShan Calligrapher Association ,a member of Tian Jing artInterchange Center.

EDUCATION:
1993.9~1993.12
NANJING Tourism School , restanrant serive and management degree
1995.6
MAANSHAN news school ,news degree
1997~1999
Party school of MAANSHAN , Economy management department  degree.
1999.11~2000.3
cadres management college of  NANJING JINGLING hotel
2004.1~2004.2
MEIHUA COMPUTER SCHOOL

Be an honest person，Act with integrity and honesty be my guide line . Strengthen self without stopping, and hold world with virtue。More than 10 years experience about hotel give me confidence .
Best wish for your computer .

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问题很多。。

为什么全是英文。。

skykiss

good !

1/4郎

一个都看不懂

天籁村

我的个妈呀！全英文！！

忆年四季.

不错哦.!

加油吧..
小伙子干的不丑!

breaking

very good

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Venus-Shen

往上海深圳发展了？

fyxiaoge

据我所知，这个是三国给别人翻译的一个建立